Writing about Smoke

WRITING SECTION IN TOEFL :

DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THE FOLLOWING STATEMENT :

SMOKING SHOULD NOT BE PERMITTED IN A PUBLIC AREA, AND THE STATE LAWS THAT PROHIBIT IT SHOULD BE UPHELD

I agree with smoking must be inhibition in a public area. 

According to The Health Expert, Smoking creates many disease. Such as in cigarettes pack written the dangerous of smoke. Smoking can cause cancer, heart attack, impotence, and pregnant disorder.

Smoking in a public area bring about air pollution. Its a danger by secondary smoke who stay in that area. Secondary smoke is passive smoke or non smokers who not directly inhaled smoke. They inhaled smoke by people smoke around their area. Especially for children if they inhaled smoke. What a pity, people who not smoke can have got negative effect by smoke. Smoke should be inhibition to prevent generate smoke. Everything which harming others are including to criminal. That caused why smoke should not be permitted in a public area.

This state laws should be upheld to take wary effect for smokers. To make they stopped smoke. Because health problem caused by smoke.

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